no one's going to roast you or your drawings, that'd just be rude.
the situation here is that there's a legion of horny people, i'm willing to bet teens, only looking to fap right now thanks this flood of various 'Ettes, they don't care about memes or giving criticism
but to give you some things you might want to think about;
-Are you using the chicken scratch technique? It might be worth practicing how to break that habit or at least learn how to erase any stray lines, I've been given advice saying that learning how to draw your lines quickly and accurately is better than being slow and meticulous.
-You have a good grasp on human anatomy, but now you gotta learn how to balance the figure. Bowsettes leg there for example is bulbous in the thigh and the flabby leg bit I can't figure the name of, but the knee is and the Achilles Tendon on the foot is very thin in comparison. Also, it might've been intentional that you made her hip ratio that dramatic, but it could be worth noting that not everyone will enjoy it.
-The right breast looks off, I don't draw breasts so I can't say much on that besides that the bottom line on that curve could can drawn farther down to make look like it isn't a foot away from the other breast. Consider getting some references, like fanart in a similar style you want yours to be, remember that it's not cheating for ripping off someone else if you want study someone else's technique.
There are many reference guide for things like eyes, lips, breasts, hands and perspective on places like Tumblr or Twitter, shit even Pixiv has an entire tag/category with galleries upon galleries of specific body parts to study from. You have the potential and willpower to advance yourself, you've proven that with your art, now use that passion positively.