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![Fire Emblem Fates-Soleil Foleo As seen previously, the conversation is completely changed, instead of a confession from Foleo, we have a semi-non- friday Anyway, in the original, Foleo finally expresses his inner issues with how he thinks others see him, the localization misses that, actually, the localization misses any type of characterization, or at least, meaningful characterization. Soleil taks about her own preferences in romance and also shows a more embarrassed side which is usually absent from the really socially free Soleil. The localization talks about a bottle of shampoo. Oh and, it finally shows what they wanted to make Foleo become. If you've seen C, B and A, you'd know Foleo has some issues with his apperance in the original, the localization takes that out. Let that sink ih. If you want to see all the other documented Fire Emblem Fates changes, check this link: #Torrentia!Downpour S Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver Forrest: Hello, Soleil. Im sorry again about the hair debacle! You've looked so down ever since! I can make it up to you. I'd be happy to sew you like mine? Would that cheer you up? Soleil: That's really sweet of you, Forrest, but I that frown upside down," but sometimes that's Soleil:What's up with you, Foleo? YOU calling MY name. Will wonders never cease. don't think a cape will help. I always say,"Tun フォレオから声をかけてくれるなんて hard to do about you Do girls? har. I don't know ソレイユは 女の子が好きなんですよね? あはは 今更そんなことを聞くの? Soleil: Ahaha. You have to ask? Of course! I love cute girls! Soleil: Oh, that's not it! I'm bummed because you wont curls and I are hopeless! あたしは可愛い女の子が大好きだよ! 男の子じゃダメなんですか? Foleo: So you're not interested in boys? I mean Forrest: Why would you say that? There are other Soleil: I wouldnt say I'm not interested in them Soleil: Really? I thought someone super-cute like I mean, look there's no grace with guys, right? we could do besides har! [ソレイユ] 女の子の方が断然好きだよ。 だから、見てても盛り上がらないんだよね you would have tons of friends already So I don't get worked up when I look at them. Forrest: I have friends, but I've always got room やっぱりそうなんですか… Soleil: But I ove you My heart really gets going when I look at you and I just want to squeeze you ch so tight! Soleil: And what if I don't want to be your friend? でも、フォレオのことは好きだよ。 見ててきゅんき ゃんするし Foleo: Realy? You really think that of me? Forrest: Oh! well, in that case, I t be on my 本当にそう思ってくれているのですか? 僕は男なのにこんな見た目で… 気持ち悪いと思ったことはないんですか? boy, but I look lke this? Soleil: How could I ever think such a thing!! Soleil: No! Wait! I didn't mean it lke that. What if I want to be MORE than your friend? フォレオはとっても素敵だもん。 Why would I chase you around so much if you フォレオを悪く言う奴がいたら picking on you, I'1l give em what If for with my ソレイユ If that's true . then would you consider a それな 僕とお付き合いしてくれませんか? Soleil: You know that I have a thing for super cute girls, right? all? I love you. Forrest: Right..but you know that Im.. 僕はソレイユのことが好きなんです。 フォ· フォレオがあたしを好き! ? Soleil: Y-you love me? ご迷惑だったでしょうか? Forrest: Well, Soleil, I think youre pretty adorable ま、 まさかそんな No no Solell: Really? フォレオみたいな可愛い子に告白されて あたし、天にも昇るような気分で Forrest: Yes! You have so much energy. When you show up, you light up the whole room. I don't even mind all of the hair pulling and the Foleo: Soleil! Soleil: Wait a minute! You said I could borrow it 僕は真剣なんです 真剣に返事をして下さい Forrest: Im teasing! In fact, I have a gift for you I got you your very own bottle. ser Soleil: Youre right sorry. But, I ..just dont Soleil: What?! For me? You mean, I can smell like でも、あたし…わかんないよ あたしフォレオに好かれるようなこと I haven't done anything to make you love me いつも追いかけ回してただけなのに らですよ ソレイユは僕が男とか女とか Without worrying about whether I'm a boy ora too, you know girl You said you んな女性は他にはいません。 僕は あなたが好きなんです… There's no other lady lke that around. That's I love you. Soleil: Aww... Thanks, Forrest! You really know a girt feel special 返事を聞かせてください。 ソレイユ Soleil: D-Don't be so mean, Foleo Im the one [BLANK] |いつもはあたしか。説く方だったのに I love you too as a woman loves a man. フォレオが好きだよ 一人の男性として [フォレオ]本当ですか! Foleo: Realy? Soleil... that makes my day! れで僕たちは恋人同士ですね! [ソレイユ ちょっと…扌包きしめないでよフォレオ. Soleil: Aiie! Wait don't hug me, Foleo! どうしてですか? Foleo: Why? Youte always hugging me. Soleil: Being hugged is different from hugging! [BLANK] するのとされるのじゃ違うんだよ! Foleo: Well that's because youfe so cute and I [フォレオ]ソレイユが可愛いのがいけないんで すよ。それに, 自分の気持ちに嘘をつく方が 恥ずかしい ソレイユ言ってませんでしたっけ? Also, lying about what you feel is more embarrassing Isnt that you said, Solell? me レイユ]フォレオのいじわる Foleo: Ehehe. You can handle a little teasing. It's not as if I'm trying to embarrass you in front of BLANK] everyone. Im going to treasure you from now [フォレオ]うふふ·いじわるでいいですよ◇ 恥さらしにはなりたくありませんから。 今まで追いかけ回された分…これからは 僕があなたを可愛がっちゃいますからね。 逃がしませんよ. 僕の可愛いソレイユ。 as you used to chase me around. I wont let you get away, my cute little [ソレイユ] なんか Soleil: Oooh I dont know about this](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/107/169/eb8.png "Soleil x Foleo S support")
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![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki x Aqua As described in the A conversation, the tail is still important because it's not only used as a way to "expose the fox" like in folklore, it's a way to also expose other's lies. Aqua is being dishonest about her mental and physical state (she's really tired), and the tail entrances her for the purpose of putting her to sleep. This cut line "You remain so graceful in your strong resolve to live, and yet here, only with me, you show me your weaknesses.." Pinpoints exactly the problem in this situation All of this is cut in the localization The conversation is also a lot more direct with the confession, while the original tried to escalate it The general lack of depth and general childish dialogue that is ever present in every localized dialogue is also present here, obviously #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Azura: Zzz... Zzz Nishiki: You're finally sleeping well . Aqua Here I am, gazing at your sleeping face Aqua, sleeping like that. She must be exhausted you've got the look of angel when you're like Kaden: Azura looks so peaceful when she's よく寝てるね アクア。 こうして寝顔を見てると アクアもまだあどけない顔をしている やっぱり色々と大変な毎日を 送っているんだろうな You really must be dealing with so many things Nishiki: Aqua, allow me to touch your hair. Since I'm always letting you pet my tail, just this It's only fair, right? I let her touch my tail little, you won't mind, right? Kaden: I bet she won't mind if I touch her hair. アクア、髪を触らせてもらうよ。 いつもしっぽを触らせてあげているんだか これくらいはいいだろう? Nishiki: Aqua. good morning. You know it's Kaden: Good morning, Azura already morning, right? アクア…おはよう。 もう朝だよ? Aqua: Yeah ah! Morning!? Azura: Wha?! Good morning? Did I stay here all あはは、 嘘だよ。 Nishiki: Ahahaha, I'm just joking Kaden: Hahaha! No. I was just kidding Azura: Oh! I guess I drifted off again. Your tail really does make an excellent cushion. You're regular pillow again BLANK] Once again I've fallen asleep curled up around going to ruin me! I'll never be able to sleep on a 私また あなたのしっぽを抱きながら 寝てしまっていたの? your tail again, have I? Nishiki: Yep Aqua: S-sorry! I've submitted to your kindness [BLANK] ご、ごめんなさい。 またあなたに甘えてしまっていたのね。 again, it seems Nishiki: That's just fine. You know I don't care if Kaden: That's OK. I wouldn't mind. Actually,I'd But more than that, I want to see your sleeping like it if you slept next to me all the time ボクはそんなこと気にしないからね。 それよりもキミの寝顔を ずっと見ていたかったな。 face next to me from now on I could gaze at your face until the morning Aqua: S-stop with the... weird jokes Nishiki: Does it sound like a joke to you? それこそ朝になるまでね。 [BLANK] ちょ、 ちょっと止めて…変な冗談は BLANK Nishiki: I love you, Aqua Kaden: Azura, I'm so in love with you. I could ボクはアクアが好きだよ 強く生きようと凛としていながらも remain so graceful in your strong resolve to watch you sleep every night. I know you havea live, and yet here only with me, you show me こうし lot on your shoulders with. But at least I can be your soft place to fall Won't you stay with me forever? things I cant help you て ses 弱いところをボクだけに見せてくれるキミ can まらなく愛おしいんだ BLANK Nishiki: You probably bear a grand fate far greater than any I can imagine And I think surely there's nothing thing I can do or you, nothing I can give you But I do think I can provide that place of peace BLANK キミはきっとボクには想像もつかないよう 大きな運命を背負っているんだろうね。 ボクにはきっと、それをどうしてあげること も foryou to re でもキミがこうして安らげる場所くらいは Will you join me 作れると思うから ク うん、私もあなたのことが好きよ。 こんなに心が安らかな気持ちになれる Aqua: Nishiki thank you. Yes, I do love you Azura: Oh, my! Kaden, if I had my choice, I'd When I'm with you, I feel like I can truly be at home! So I want to be by your side from now on, if never leave your side! You make me feel so at だからこれからもあなたの隣にいさせて? ou me Nishiki: Yes, of course. I'll be yours and yours Kaden: Then it's settled. You can have me all to alone foreve yourself...always ずっとボクを独り占めしておくれ。 ク Aqua: Yes, Nishiki [An element of the trance Azura: You have no idea how wonderful that magic is present in this line]](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/833/430.png "Aqua x Nishiki S support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki x Aqua Because of the changes to the C and B supports, the localized version just had to give Aqua reasons for what she is doing. The conversation become more childish and lackluster, even taking out lines that deepen the bond between Aqua/Azura and Nishiki/Kaden There's more depth lost on the meaning of the tails again, but it's only in the support S that there's an explanation, so for the reason, I will spoil the meaning only in the S support. #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Aqua: Whew.. today's tactics council went on Azura: That war council meeting went on ar That said, now's the most the most crucial period, so I suppose there's nothing to be forever! I know it's important, but my goodness! 今日の軍議は長引いてしまったわ… でも今が一番大事なときなのだから、 仕方ないわね Nishiki: You're looking pretty tired, Aqua Kaden: Whoa! You look exhausted. I've never seen such heavy bags under someone's eyes! お疲れの様子だね、 アクア Aqua: Nishiki no, I'm fine, really Azura: Kaden, you probably shouldn't tell people Nishiki: Doesn't look that way to me. You've this Kaden: I don't know. You don't seem fine. You pallid look on your face and you're getting bags look paler than death! Do ya need a nap? under your eyes Perhaps 顔色が悪いし、目元にクマもできている。 もしかして寝不足なのかい? you've not been sleeping lately? そうね…夜になると色々と考え込んでしまっ Azura: No, I can't sleep. I just lie there with my Aqua: No, I havent obsessing about so many things and I just can't eyes wide open and my mind racing at night I just start 眠れなくなるの。 Kaden: That sounds terrible! You've got to look それはいけないね。 睡眠をとることは食事と同じくらい大切だ Nishiki: You can't be doing that to yourself! Getting some proper sleep is just as important after yourself, Azura as getting a good meal わかっているわ…でも… 今は泣き言は言ってられないのよ Aqua: I understand all that... but right nowI Azura: I know. I've just got a lot on my plate can't just start whining about it all … Nishiki: With everything you're dealing with, it Kaden: Well, I can't help with that. I try to keep must be exhausting! Looks like you've got a lot my plate empty. But I can at least offer you a of anxiety too キミは色々と大変なんだね 悩みも多いようだし… ボクはこんな性格だし、あんまり人の悩みを! I don't think I'm the kind of guy who can solve 解決することはできないかもしれないけど この間みたいにしっぽを抱き枕の代わりに Remember the other day? I can at least offer してあげることくらいはできるよ? super-soft pillow. Surely that'll help, right? people's problems, but you my tail as a huggable pillow just like then? Aqua: O-oh, please, if you would stop talking of Azura: Do you mean your tail? Nishiki: Come on. look at it, looook at it. そ、 その話は止めてくれるかしら Kaden: What else?! Come on, Azura. I'm being serious. If you don't rest, you'll get sick! can't resist looking at it, Azura: I guess you have a point. Your tail does Aqua: Aaaah aaah Im so pathetic 見逃せなくなる自分が情けない look like it would make a nice pillow Nishiki: All joking aside Aqua, you don't have to push yourself so hard. nice spot to curl up for a nap. Off to bed! If you destroy your body, you're not going to | have anything left to work with and it will all be Kaden: The best! Now follow me. We'll find a アクア、 無理はしないほうがいいよ。 らに。 Azura: All right, Kaden. Thank you. You're always so kind to me Aqua: Nishiki Nishiki: You say that, but I don't think my words [BLANK] are getting through to you. You're going to でもこんな言葉もキミには届かないんだろう continue pushing yourself to the break キミはやっぱり無理をし続ける気がする。 だからそんなときにボクにできることは しっぽを貸すくらいさ。 必要な時にはいつでも呼んでおくれ。 So when you're feeling like you've got nothing left, all I can offer you is my tail Please, call me whenever you need me es BLANK I'm probably intruding on your good nature, but ! when I need to, I'll ty ご厚意に甘えさせてもらうかもしれないけ そのときはよろしくね。 うん、じゃあね。アクア·早く寝るんだよ。 Nishiki: Yes, do that. Now Aqua, you'd best go to s [BLANK] leep quicky es BLANK or entranced.] Nishiki: BLANK Aqua, are you chasing my tail AGAIN? Aqua: Ah! [Note: And this is like someone [BLANK] waking up from a trance.]](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/832/2b7.png "Aqua x Nishiki A support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki X Aqua The first thing to mention is how the localizers have made a mistake in their translation. They translate原っぱ("harappa" or "open field") to葉っぱ(happa" or "leaves"). Which is why Kaden/ Nishiki rolls around in leaves rather than in an open, grassy field which by definition tends to have no leaves As explained in the C conversation, the identity of the fox and their magic depends on their tails (catching their tail is also a way to de-mask them, which is present in the folklore), so Aqua getting entranced is part of the legend of the "kitsune". This can be framed as a "cultural change", but the dialogue is too descriptive for people in the west to not understand. This again, is completely missing, and was the main theme during the whole conversations Aqua/Azura seems to guilt trip herself in the localization for touching Kaden/Nishiki's fur without permission, while in the original, that type of implication is not present. It's probably because of the missing reason for why she was doing such a thing, that being, her inability to stop because of the magical powers of the tail #Torrentia!Downpour B Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver Nishiki: U-urm na What's this? how did I get here again? Oh, yeah! I wandered through this field when I decided to roll around Why have I been sleeping in an open field? Ah! That's right! I'd been rolling around in this in the leaves! They felt SO good. I curled up and omfy, grassy grove, and then I must have fallen asleep Sheesh. always told I've got no sense of the danger of あれ went to sleep. Ha! No wonder people call me lazy! ...Huh? What's that?! I think something's んな野原で寝ているんだろう? it's because of times like this that I'm touching my head! ACK! 原っぱが気持ち良くてゴロゴロしていたら、 そのまま眠ってしまったのか はぁ…こんなんだから、緊張感が無いと 言われてしまうんだろうね Hm? Why do I all of a sudden feel like my tail なんだか、しっぽに触られてる感触が… うわああああ--っ!!! [アクア] What's going on? Azura: Oh, my! Are you awake?! Nishiki: A-Aqua, is that you? Why on Earth are Kaden: Azura? Is that you?! What are you ア、アクアじゃないか!! どうしてこんなところに!? Ol あら、 もう朝なの? Azura: Goodness. This is awkward good morrni Nishiki: This is no time for good mornings! Mind telling why YOU are sleeping with MY tail petting me ar ? And why are どうしてキミはボクのしっぽを 抱き枕代わりに寝てるのさ r hugga Azura: ..Er, I was walking through this field 私…その 自分の意識とは関係なく 身体が勝手に反応して近寄ってしまうの well... it happens without me even noticing, when I saw you over here taking a nap. Ever my body just moves of its own accord to get since the other day, I've been wondering what close to it your fur felt like. This is so embarrassing, butI didn't think you'd wake up! I just barely brushed ou Nishiki: Uh... what? ra: あなたの しっぽに。 Nishiki: Toward my... tail? oh! Ahahahahaha! Of course, now I understand here. I'd be honored to have you stroke my fur what was going, it was that all along, wasn't it? I had no idea you were into foxes! Don't mind, don't mind. The honor is all mine! あ! あははは ! なるほど、そういうことだったのか!! いやいや、光栄だなー! それほどまでにボクのしっぽが 魅力的だったということだもんね! y tail wasj wondrous and bewitching! Aqua: I don't want to admit it, but .. yes ra: Nishiki: So that's why, the other day when you Kaden: Is that why you left so abruptly the other pretended y chasing after me, weren't you? were lost, you were actually ay Aqua: Y-yes, I admit it I just want to touch it, Azura: I'm afraid so. I didn't think I could resist ちょっと 触ってみたくって giving you a little scratch behind the ears! Nishiki: And then today while I was slumbering Kaden: Azura, I'm shocked! away, you were entranced by my tail, And in the それで今日うたた寝してるボクの caressing it, you f Il asleep, huh? ua w you had it in you! ア Aqua: I can't help it .. there's nothing I can do Azura: So am I. I had this overwhelming desire やメ to reach out and touch that silky-soft fur 自分でもどうしようもないんだから Nishiki: Well if that's the case, then youre free Kaden: Well, go to touch it whenever you want to! Look, look! How about a touch? いつでも触っておくれよ! Aqua: Oooh.. don't tempt me so much, please! [BLANK] Ahhh I can't stop thinking about it... it's so cute and fluffy 目の前でフラフラさせないでちょう て仕方な Nishiki: Look deep into my eyes, watch it swing [BLANK] baaac 揺れてますよ Nishiki: Hahaha, no worries BLANK ははは、すまなかったね 角虯たくなったらいつでも触りに来ておく 別に減るものではないからね。 ver you fee petting it, come and do | so, anytime. It's not like it's going to fade away ou Azura: Thanks for being so understanding Nishiki: No problem! Well, I've got to get going. | Kaden: Are you kidding?! This is awesome! hope you visit me all the time now ではボクはそろそろ行くよ。 [ア Aqua: Wait! If you go first, I'm going to want to Azura: Really? I'd love that. chase after · 待って!あなたが先に去ってしまうと 後ろ姿を追いかけたくなるから… you, so... Nishiki: Ahahaha, well then ladies first! あはは](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/830/2c1.png "Aqua x Nishiki B support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki X Aqua The dialogue has had cultural alterations to it, specifically to the power of the kitsune's tail. In Japanese folklore, a kitsune is a fox with great intelligence that most of the times also have magical powers and wisdom which increases with the time they are alive (and with the tails), they have the power to shapeshift in men or women which they use in various ways depending on the story The fox's tail is important because it's related to their magical powers (besides their identity), and they have difficulty hiding them when in human form, which is why in folklore, one of the ways to determine their identity is to check for their tails when they're confused, drunk, eto In our case, Aqua is entranced by his tail, this whole cultural part of the conversation is completely missing, instead, it's trivialized by making it seem as if Aqua has an obsession with "cute and fluffy things, when it's the magic doing this to her. Further explanations can be seen on the B conversation in As for the rest of the changes, they're the general cut lines and alterations, besides trivializing the characters personalities. Eg. "I gotta practice so everyone will think I'm cool, calm, and collected- #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Nishiki: Hey Aqua, how's it going? Kaden: Hiya, Azura! ...Geez. You've got a scary look on your face right now Azura: Oh, hello, Kaden. What do you mean? Kaden: It seems like you've got a bee in your こんにちは。 a: Greetings こんにちは Nishiki: What's this? You've got quite a grim look on your face Just looking at you makes me feel like the air around us is fraught with tension. Are you bonnet- Er, hairdo thingy. What's up? 随分と真剣な顔をしているね、キミは? 周囲の空気がぴりっと張りつめてる感じ. 何か考え事でもしているのかい? WO t something? a: Nothing's wrong this is how I Azura: I'm afraid I don't understand. This is my usual face. Nothing is bothering me rea 普通にしているだけよ。 Nishiki: Ooh, I wish I could project that feeling Kaden: WOW. That is seriously impressive. Man just by being myse I couldn't look that uptight if I tried! そんな風だなんて、 羨ましいよ。 se illage for such a long time, because even when I'm jumping into the fray of war like this, people just think Ive got no sense of the gravity of the 里で平和に暮らしてたせいか うして戦争に参加してても、どうも 緊張感が無いと思われてしまうんだよね。 Azura: No, I guess not. You always have that 確かにニシキはいつも 楽しそうにしているわね。 Aqua: Now that you mention it, you always seem like you go about life so joyfull grin on your face, don't you? Kaden: Ha! Yep! If I'm not careful, people will think I've lost my claws and turned into a pet Nishiki: Ahaha, so that's how people see me やっぱりそう見えるかい? 平和ボケした狐だと思われないよう ve got to be careful not to come across as some sort of hippie Azura: And what would be wrong with that? I wish I could frolic through life the way you do Aqua: I don't know, don't you think you're 別にあなたはそのままでいいんじゃない? | better off like that? Here I'm wishing I could 私は愛想のいいあなたが羨ましいぐらいよーcome off as amicable as you are! ea t makes me happy to hear Kaden: You do? Aww! You're making my tail そう言われると嬉しいね。 しっぽが勝手に揺れてしまうよ。 that. So happy that my tail just starts wagging wag. Look! ..Azura, is something wrong? You're |on its own. Ah ha ha えへへ ha giving me a crazy look right now a: BLANK] Nishiki: Aqua? Aqua... what's the matter all of a[BLANK] Aqua: ...Oh, uh, no. Nothing, nothing at all. I Azura: Oh, my. Forgive me for staring. I've just started thinking about your big tail and just never seen your tail up close. It's so fluffy! あ、 いえ, なんでもないわ。 Nishiki: Oh, is that it? Humans rarely see such a Kaden: I always forget that you humans don ああ、そうか。このしっぽは ヒトには珍しく映るんだったね。 睨まれてるのかと思って びっくりしてしまったよ。 それじゃあボクはこれで。 have tails. It's too bad. They're amazing! splendid tail, it's true I got all flustered because I thought you were Well, I should go. See you later, Aqua well, I better get going. (I can believe I almost reached out to pet him!) a. Nishiki: Whew . Aqua's so great. Always coo Kaden: All right. Catch ya later. *sigh Wow and calm, with that serious air about her 常に緊張感があって冷静で。 ボクもあれぐらい冷静に見えれば、 より美しい狐に Azura's so lucky. She's got that serious look down pat. I gotta practice so everyone will think I'm cool, calm, and collected-just like her! would be even an more beautiful fox [BLANK] [BLANK] Nishiki: Whoa! Whoa! What the? Aqua, what's going on? I thought you had just gone that way. あれ? アクア、どうしたんだい? あっちに行ったものとばかり あっ ええと ちょ、ちょっと道を間違えてしまったわ。 Aqua: Oh? I, no, well . for a minute there, I- [BLANK] I guess I lost my way Nishiki: Oh, if that's what it was, okay BLANK] Aqua: Yes, yes, whatever sorry..! BLANK] ごめんなさい ! Nishiki: I wonder what that was all about ...?[BLANK] She was looking pretty agitated there..](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/829/88e.png "Aqua x Nishiki C support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Aqua Some nuances and subtle expressions of emotion are lost here. In the original, Inigo first has the mpression that Aqua understood towards whom the feelings in his dance are directed to, but she was hesitant because of her status as a princess, he then misinterprets her trying to hide her feelings with her thinking that he lkes another woman and wants to help him achieve such a relationship, also believing that she does not have feelings for him. In the localization he's secretive at first and then immediately turns brash in the same situation, this is out of character for the shy and awkward Inigo Another slight difference is how the localization makes it seem as if Inigo is dancing intentionally trying to convey his feelings of love towards Aqua, the original instead conveys that one can simply see emotion through dance, and while Aqua did not fail to notice his feelings of love, she didn't know those were feelings that had to do with her Two smaller quips are again, the lack of the ring and how the localization puts an emphasis on Aqua's royalty as a reason for Aqua and Inigo not being compatible, while the original is much more subtle by expressing things like There's no way Aqua-sama really thinks that. #Torrential Downpour upport Translation Nintendo of America Ver. ふぅ…今日はこれぐらいかな. ▼ Aqua: .Lazwald. Is your dance practice over? [BLANK] ラズワルド。 踊りの練習は終わり?▼ .!? You were Laslow: Lady Azura, is that you? Were you spying on my dance practice again? again? ? [アクア見てたんですか Aqua: Yes. Im sorry for not greeting you. I was Azura: I'm so sorry. I couldn't help myself. You just too enthralled ええ 声をかけなくてごめんなさい。 [ラズワルド] Laslow: Thank you. That's kind of you to say are you...n love? Azura: There's a glow about you. If I didn't know better, I'd think you were in love Laslow: Uh...no! Where'd you get that idea? Azura: Oh. It's nothing. There's a sensitivity to ねえ、 ラズワルド. あなたは..恋をしてるの?▼ ! !どうしてですカ ? ▼ 今の踊りを見て [ラズワルド] Aqua: I thought that from watching your dance your dancing now It feelings based on watching dances. That dance were thinking of someone special. You can tell just now was...you were thinking of a precious me... Perhaps I could put in a good word for you person while dancing. 私、 踊りを見れば気持ちがわかるって。 ▼ Am I wrong? 誰か大切な人を想って踊っていた. ▼ Lazwald: Y-You're not wrong but.... ち、 違わないですけど..▼ see じゃあ私、 [ラズワルド] 何か力になれることはある?▼ ラズワルドは大切な友達 いいえ、大切な同志だもの。▼ だから できる事なら力になりたいの。 Aqua: About Lazwald's pr precious soulmate. So...if there's anything I can do to help, I'd love to. ▼ your skills at Laslow: For someone so in tune with everyone recognising feelings by watching dance are a else's emotions, you sure can be oblivious! 踊りを見て気持ちを理解する力 多分ちょっと鈍ってますよ。▼ a: Lazwald: That's because the dance just now was Laslow: Milady, it was you. You're the person I while thinking about Aqua-sama. You're very as thinking about just now.I guess I'm not as slow if you can't recognise it was about yourself. good at conveying my emotions as I thought. だって今の踊りは アクア様を想って踊ってたんです。▼ キNy気づかないなんて アクア様よっぽど鈍いんですね. ▼ sigh* If you'll excuse me...clearly, I need more え [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Yeah. And, my dance is still a work in [BLANK] progress... Ahh, can't be helped. I'll have to go back to square one and think of different まだまだだっていうことかも. ▼ 戻って違う振り付けでも考えようっと. ちょ、ちょっと待ってラズワルド!▼ ▼ Azura: Wait. Don't go, Laslow! Laslow: Hmm? Azura: What did you mean?! You were thinking on Aqua: What you said just now..what do you そのままの意味ですよ 僕はアクア様のことが好きです. ▼ でも、アクア様は王女様だし… 身分が違いすぎます. ▼ だから見返りは求めません。 聞いてくれただけで嬉しいから…▼ Lazwald: I meant what I said. I like Aqua-sama. Laslow: Milady, I mean exactly that. I'm in love you, but its different from me. So you can't reciprocate. I'm and I am nothing! That's why I can only love glad that you listened to me so..thanks. Aqua: T-That....Don't just give up. You're.slow Azura: Well, now you're the one being oblivious! too. I also..like. love 鈍いのは あなたも同じよ. 私も あなたが好き ▼ Aqua: That I wanted to hep with your love was... [BLANK] a lie. I wanted to.become your favourite あなたの恋の力になりたいなんて 本当は"私があなたのいちばんに ま、まさかアクア様が そう思ってくれてるなんて…▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Uum. Now that we've both opened up ええと なかなか謀が出て来ないですね. ▼ [23ワル その…今度指輪を買いに行きましょう。 結婚するなら必要だろうし. ▼ | [BLANK] | Lazwald: Um From now on Aqua: Lazwald. Im Lazwald: Eh? this time, let's go buy a ring. You SO ラズワルド。 Laslow: Huh? 私はあなたを想って歌う あなたは、私を想って踊って。▼ 指輪や愛の言葉も嬉しいけど… 私にとっては、それがいちばん幸せだから· Aqua: Sing while thinking of you...you danced Azura: There aren't many people I can talk to while thinking of me. I'm happy about the rings about music or singing or dance.....et alone and the words of love but..according to me perform with! I thought we shared something [your dancing] is what makes me the most happy. cial So now I feel like I want to, too Lazwald: Is that so... Yeah, let's do that. This Laslow: I didn't realize our duet had such an tak can wait. Besides it'll be conveyed through | impact on you. 1ラズワルド] そうですね、うん、そうしましょう。 これからの話はそのあとで. ▼ それに 歌に踊りなら、きっと届きます。 僕とアクア様の両親の元まで. ▼ う思うわ Azura: Well, it did. I don't care if you're a prince or not, Laslow. I want to be with you. 。 Lazwald: Well, let's start, Aqua-sama Laslow: Really? Then will you accompany me これからはアクアって呼んで。 Aqua: From now on, just Aqua will do. Lazwald... Azura: Nothing would make me happier. I'll sing [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Aqua. I got it. From now on, I'll dance Laslow: .And I'll dance with you in my heart. for これからも君のために、 躍らせてね. ▼ Aqua: Me, too...From now on, I'll sing for you. Azura: May our song never end! これからも、 あなたのために歌わせて。 ▼](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/092/123/989.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo S support")
![Fire Emblem Fates Lazwald x Aqua Inigo is more outright about the reasons for why he danced better, talking about trying to be more self-confident, this is changed to the weird "I remembered what you said and tried to channel my inner Azura.". Him mentioning the difficulty of the ordeal is absent, the original has him be bright red" which means either embarrassment or fatigued because of trying hard/fatigue The original makes Inigo's reaction to Aqua's pendant out to be that she's a good singer regardless of where her power comes from (to which Aqua responds accordingly by encouraging Inigo), while the localization makes Inigo's seem in disbelief, changing his reaction to the pendant in question and making it more seem as if Aqua herself is the one with the power A smaller change is how Queen Mikoto is seen in the original versus the localization. While the original it's more the plea of a mother towards the child so the child could sing with more confidence the localization portrayed this as more of an ultimatum, either Aqua sings with confidence, or have her waste her talent in fear. This changes Aqua's motivation for gaining confidence, albeit slightly #Torrential Downpour upport Translation Original Nintendo of America Ver [ラズワルド] Laslow: Lady Azura, I've you! Did you see me dancing today? ou ア 見つけまし Aqua: Lazwald [アクア] ラズワルド…▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Um..About the dance on todays 今日の戦場での踊りなんですが…▼ Aqua: Yes, I know. You seemed like a changed Azura: Yes! At first, I didn't even recognize you ou あなた、別人みたいだった. ▼ 別人みたいに 素敵だったわ。▼ 良か 今日はアクア様の言う通り 自分に自信を持って踊ったんです。▼ 「僕を見て」「この踊りを見て」って Lazwald: !! Im glad.. Like Aqua-sama said, I Laslow: I remembered what you said and tried tried dancing with self confidence today. While to channel my inner Azura thinking "Look at me!" and "Look at my dance!" .It was really difficult though. すごく難しかったですけどね。▼ I see. [BLANK] You あなた、顔が真っ赤だったもの。▼ [ラズワルド] Aqua: But, it was your most wonderful yet. It Azura: Well, your passion was contagious. We felt like there was power throughout your whole could all feel it. |body でも、 今までで一番素敵だったわ。 体じゅうから、力が湧いてくるぐらい. アクア様の助言のおかげですよ。▼ ごめんんさい ▼ Laslow: It's all thanks to your advice, milady Aqua: Im sorry...I said some cruel things the ! other day Azura: Actually, I wanted to apologize about この前は、あなたに酷いことを言ったわね [ラズワルド] Lazwald: No, I was in the wrong. I really didn't Laslow: You were extremely harsh, but have any confidence when I was dancing on the everything you said was true battlefield until now. What would I do if-it was 僕がわるかったんですよ。▼ 本当は、今までずっと..戰場で踊碍に 自分に自信がなかったんです。▼ 上手くいかなかったらどうしよう。 男のくせにって思われたらどうしようって。 Even Aqua: Lazwald....You really are just like my ラズワルド…▼ やっぱりあなた [ラズワルド] 昔のアクア様 Aqua: Yes. I also always thought the same as Azura: I didn't tell you this, but I used to get you. If I couldn't sing like my mother, and I had stage fright. My mother was so talented... I no self confidence in my singing.. .I sang while knew I'd never measure up! I always worried thinking everyone would make fun of me 私もず あなたと同じことを思っていたの。▼ お母様のように歌えなくて 歌うことに自信がなくて…▼ みんなに馬鹿にされるんじゃないかって 思いながら歌っていたことがあった…▼ ould me [ラズワルド] Laslow: Really? I had no idea あなたの歌は素晴ら いつでも、どんな時でも 私それから変われたの。 Aqua: But, at that time....Queen Mikoto said to Azura: One day, Queen Mikoto pulled me aside me, "Your voice is wonderful...but it comes to She told me my voice was beautiful. I could nothing if you're scar confidence no matter who you're singing for." at waste my talent being afraid. That was a turning that time. And from then on I changed. So It's ed. Please s either learn to sing with confidence, or I 相手が誰でも point for me. I decided to be brave every time I on ら…同じことをあなたにも伝えたかっ Lazwald: So you were worried about me...Thank Laslow: I hope I can perform with such power you, Aqua-sama. I'll try harder. I want to use a one day 僕を心配してくれたんですね クア様みたいな力を、 僕も使えるよ ア [ラズワルド] Lazwald: The mysterious power that Aqua uses Laslow: Your voice has a special power. Out on 戦場でアクア様が使ってらっしゃる 不思議な力のことです。▼ 見た人や聴いた人が元気になって いつもより活躍できる…そんな力。▼ 僕の母も、戦場でそんな踊りを踊って みんなの力になったんですよ。▼ watching and listening the battlefield , you inspire the soldiers. When become energised, and more active than before... you sing, you give them strength and encourage That power. My mother also danced a dance like them to keep fighting! My mother was the same on gave ever Aqua: But...my power can't be used without this Azura: I'm afraid you're wrong. My power comes pendant. So it's not a good goal for you でも…私の力は from this pendant. It's not me ンダントが無いと使えないわ.▼ だから あなたに目標にされるほど 立派なものではないの. ▼ [ラズワルド] そうなんですか..▼ でも、そのペンダントが無くたって 例えが使えなくたって…▼ アクア様の歌が素敵なことに 変わりはありませんよ. ▼ was gone, and that power was gone...the fact Laslow: Hmm. I find that hard to believe Thank you. You'll certainly become a Azura: Well, if you keep dancing like you did あなたはきっと 素晴らしいダンサーになるわ. ▼ 人を勇気づけて、笑顔にする そんな力を使う人に、きっとなれる。 wonderful dancer. Someone who can cheertoday, everyone will be asking you to dance people up, and make them smile...you'll have that kind of power ▼ はい 今はまだ全然届かないですが いつか必ず、そうなってみせます. ▼ Lazwald: Yes...I'm not there yet, but I'll become Laslow: I promise to save a dance for you like that one day I'll sing Azura:I wouldn't mind taking you up on that celebration of your first step. Will you...dance to offer right now. What if I sing and you dance? それじゃあ今日は 夢への第一歩のお祝いに歌を歌わせて. 私の歌で 踊ってくれるからしら。 素敵なダンサーさん?▼ ▼ [ラズワルド] ald: Gladly, Miss Be Laslow: I would love that, mi 麗しの歌姫様. ▼ And you shall be my muse! a:](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/092/121/54f.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo A support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Aqua A back and forth between Azura/Aqua and Inigo/Lazwald has been removed for seemingly no reason, the conversation tried to pinpoint the problem with Inigo's dance, which turned out to be his shyness and awkwardness when in front of a public. Azura instead guesses immediately what the problem is A crucial change is to Aqua's reasoning. In the original, she claims that Inigo's dance is not showing his true feelings, which would make his dancing worse and that could push people away. Aqua is really harsh when it comes to this, shown by how she questions why exactly does he dance. The threat that people might choose to ignore his dance weighs down on Inigo, thus, this gives him a greater incentive to learn how to properly show his true feelings through dance. The localization does not include all this, instead, Aqua's reasoning is simply that Inigo is unfair to his audience, missing a lot of Inigo's characterization besides Aqua's #Torrential Downpour B Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver アクア Azura: You are the ocean's gray waves.. ユラリ、ユルレリ Lazwald: Aqua-sama. Are you practicing singing? [BLANK] アクア様、 歌の練習ですか?▼ Aqua: Lazwald....Yes, I am. Are you practicing [BLANK] er あなたは、 踊りの練習かしら. ▼ Lazwald: Yes, that's right. Uh, just so I'm not aslow: Did I interrupt you? Forgive me, but そうです s dancing just now from over here, it looked like you were dancing en right? Singing and dancing at the same time...it 今、 アクア様も踊ってましたよね?▼ てらっ すごく綺麗でした。 ▼ Aqua: Thank you. Singing and dancing a little at Azura: My mother taught me a few steps. A the same time is good...is what my mother ありがとう。歌を歌う時に 少しは踊れた方がいいからって…▼ そう言われてお母様に教わったの。▼ dance as well ht me Lazwald: Heeh...! Same as me, then. My dance Laslow: I had no idea your mother danced. What was also taught My mother へえ !僕と同じですね。 僕の踊りも、母から教わったんです。 y my mother a coincidence ▼ Aqua: Is that so....I was thinking that your choreography was quite feminine. I was alwa wondering why but your dance seems a little lonely. ....You can't see though you are mourning for her your mother anymore, can you Azura: Well, you certainly inherited her grace You have such a lovely, fluid quality... But there's a hint of sadness too. I almost feel as そう 道理であなたの踊りには たまに女性の振り付けが入ってると思って that's the reason. But now, どうしてかな それからあなたの踊りは少し寂し きっともう…そのお母様には会えないのね。 t from ou わかるんですね。 ▼ Sing transmitting your feelings without minding about words. So, I really like singing and dancing 葉を介さなくても気持ちが伝わるのよ。 だから私は歌や踊りが好きだわ。▼ 言葉よりも誤解無く 相手に気持ちが伝わるもの。▼ ▼ Azura: Music and dance never lie. I don't mea to offend you, but sometimes, I don't think Without as many misunderstandings as just your your feelings. ..So, Lazwald. There's something I'd 私、あなたに聞きたいことがあるの。 なんですが. ▼ あなた…自分を見てほしいって ▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: What is it? [BLANK] [アクア [BLANK] Aqua: You....do you think you want to be watched while you dance? BLANK] [BLANK] [BLANK] [BLANK] Laslow: What?! You're calling me a liar? Lazwald: Eh?! W-What, what's with that... な、なんですかそれ..▼ Aqua: It's fine, so answer いいから、答えて. [ラズワルド] ▼ SO [アクア]思ってますよ [ラズワルド] Eh?! 戦場でのあなたの踊り… いつも見ているわ. ▼ もちろんとても上手だし、 持ちの強さを感じ Aqua: At your dancing on the battlefield..I'mAzura: Yes, but let me explain! I've seen you always watching. It's very good, and it's pretty... dance in front of the others before... You have but I don't feel the strength of your feelings. great technique, but your dancing lacked the When I happened upon you by chance ar prettier 素敵だけれど passion I saw the other night Now that I've seen you dance in private, I know you've been it was の前偶然見た練習の方が ding back. ええと Lazwald: Uum, that's...I-I get embarassed.... Laslow: I thought you would understand. I get 人が大勢いると ron Aqua: Embarassed...? Then why did you choose [BLANK] to dance? If you keep thinking "don't look at me, don't look at me" while you dance..the people watching will leave ならどうして、 踊ることを選んだの?▼ 踊っていたら 見る人に失礼よ。 ▼ [ラズワルド] BLANK] 気に障ったのならごめんなさい。 でも 戦場はあなたの舞台でしょう。 練習を見られてしるのは構わなし Aqua: I'm sorry for hurting your feelings. But Azura: This may sound harsh, but dancing like the battlefield is your stage, isn't it. If someone's that is unfair to your audience! Practice in secret watching, you don't get embarassed. But why don't you take that to the actual stage. I too, there for them! You must dance with confidence ! have to have self-confidence while singing ▼ all you want, but when you step on stage, you're それを 舞台に持ち込むべきではない so they can carry your strength into battle 自分に自信を持って歌っているもの。 ▼ wa アクア Aqua: Tha's all I wanted to say. So then..good Azura: Well, you should. Now if you'll excuse luck with practice それじゃあ 練習、 頑張って. ▼ W: アクア様…▼](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/092/120/bf3.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo B support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Kamui x Charlotte In the Japanese version, the character's avatar's personality would reflect whomever they chose to get close to, giving the player some agency in choosing how they wanted to characterize them, instead, the localization does not feature this when choosing Charlotte Charlotte's a character which wears a mask all the time, to hide her true personality of someone manipulative and foul mouthed. Primarily, she's nicer but also sexually aggressive in her pretend character. Kamui in the original notices this later on (recurring throughout the supports), and expresses aversion towards her pretend character's sexual aggression, this was completelyr sed in the localization, instead having him claim that her mask is frail and weak, most likely because of a misconception The localization suffers in noticing the differences in the Japanese language (the likely reason for the misconception), there are vocabulary mistakes, especially in the way Charlotte expresses herself, toning down her true personality. E.g. see http://i.imgur.com/RBaKXfw.png Overall, the support featured a more intimate and amicable relationship, the localization, because of the several alterations, took out such feeling #Torrential Downpour S Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver ロッテ:どうしたのよ。いきなり呼び出し| Charlotte: What's with you? Calling me out o Charlotte: Why the sudden summons? e blue Kamui: I thought I'd follow in your lead and spit Corrin: After our last conversation, I thought I'd カムイ:僕も君を見習って、心をさらけ出そうと out everything I've been thinking. So from now 思ってね。僕は今から 自分を偽ることなく、本on I'm going to tell you my true feelings 当の気持ちを言う try opening up a bit, like you. There is some real value in being honest, and I'd like to do that without lying to myself Charlotte:What the f---? I love Y シャーロッテ:は?なんなのよ、 一体。 Charlotte:I am...very confused right now Corrin: What I'm trying to say is... I love you Charlotte: What?! Milord, you're speaking crazy カムイ 君が好きだ は、はぁ! ?あんた、頭Charlotte: lobotomy? The f---? Did you geta talk. You need to see a healer i: I'm just fine Corrin: I'm perfectly fine, Charlotte Charlotte: S-stop screwing around with people's Charlotte: If you are in your right mind, then heads like that! シャーロッテ:ひ、 人を馬鹿にすんのもいい加減 you should know how rude it is to mock people Kamui: I'm not screwing around or making fun Corrin: I'm not making fun of you! I'm very カムイ:馬鹿になんてしてし Charlotte: But. you're talking about me? Me! Charlotte: We...we did talk about how my Not only do I have a filthy mouth and a bad personality, but I'm a woman who chops dwn actually an aggressive, tree- smashing girl? trees with my bare hands!? 私よ?私なのよ! ?0% な シャーロッテ:だって helpless-woman thing is an act, right? How I'm カムイ:そんな言い方はよくないよ。 Kamui: You shouldn't talk about yourself like Corrin: Heh, didn't you say the wind blew that tree over? Charlotte: B-but, that's what I am Charlotte: Shut up-you know that was a lie. My point is, I wasn't honest with you before. How can you trust me? カムイ:裏表があるっていうのを気にするのは変Kamui: It's a little weird to get all bent out of だよ。誰しもそういう部分を持っているから shape about the difference in who you are and ね。とにかく僕は君の人間らしいところが好what you show to the world. Everyone deals Corrin: I think I'd be worried about the kind of person I am if your secrets bothered me | Everyone has something they'd rather not show with that. In any case, the very fact that you're to the world. You're human, Charlotte. And the so real and human is what I lov are anese sounds for when | Charlotte: * sniff * sniff * dy starting crying] カムイ:どうしたの? Kamui: What's wrong? somethin wrong Charlotte: [Japanese onomatopoeia for when BLANK] somebody starts sobbing uncontrollably] カムイ:えええええ!? Kamui: Whaaat the helll BLANK] Charlotte: The tears the tears just won't stop Charlotte: The tears... They won't stop!! And in これは本当の涙だから 一瞬で涙を流すテクニックは持ってるけ coming! Oh, I should let you know that these case you weren't sure, these are genuine tears are real tears, okay? I know how to ておくけど ry on Sure, I can cry on command, but this is - ね。 command, but this is different. Believe me カムイ:わかってる。 わかってるよ。 it. it. Corrin: I believe you, but...why are you crying? 本当に私なんかでいいの? Charlotte: But would you really be happy with Charlotte: Because hearing you say that is one of the nicest things I've ever heard... And I've gotten about me. But...are you sure you want to be ロッテ:でも me thing カムイ:うん、全然、 大丈夫。 I am completely sure. I th ver BLANK] BLANK] Kamui: I think it'd be fun if I were you Everyday would be full of surprises 楽しそうだよ。 毎日が刺 あな て相当な変わリCharlotte You're some kind of a weirdo, Charlotte: Corrin I'm not entirely sure you know what? カムイ:かもね。でも、そっちの方がいいと思うKamui: Maybe I am. But I still think you're the よ。変わり者同士のカップルなら永遠に一緒に one for me. We can be weirdos in love who | Corrin: That could be true, hahah. But if so, isn't that a good thing? Two people, crazy and in love, could never tire of each other never get tired of each other, whaddya think? Thanks, Kamui. I'm nothing Charlotte: . You might be right. Thank you つつか者ですが、末永くよろしくお願いしま れは本音なんだからね! ally, but here's to a long life together. I-I'm Corrir カムイ:うん、 わかってるよ。 こちらこそ、 これ Kamui: Yeah, I get it. From me to you, here's to [BLANK]](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/091/828/0cc.png "Charlotte x Kamui significant S support alterations")
![Fire Emblem Fates: Aqua x Ryoma S-Support Conversation And this is the culmination of the changes to the previous conversations. The previous changes still have an effect on the future conversations. The whole support turned into a discussion about groceries and depending on people for chores. Like in many ather support conversations anything related to rings is taken out #Torrential Downpour Translati Original NOA V ersion (777]リョウマ、さっきは食材の買い出しに 付き合ってくれてありがとう。 ! Aqua: Thanks for coming with me to go buy | Azura. Thanks again for carrying in the Ryoma: Oh, uh... Sure. Not a problem. [アクア]あと、続けて悪いのだけど、 軍議用の資料作りを頼まれてるの。 Aqua: Also, sorry to keep on so, but actually I've been asked to prepare the stats help with this paperwork...if you have time. for the tactics council. Azura: There's one other thing. I could use Aqua: If it's akay...help me out there 手伝ってもらえるかしら? [リョウマ]あーああ。 S-sure. Ryoma: Aqua: Ryouma? What's wrong. ? You ve Azura: Ryoma? Are you all right? You seem been seeming a bit under the weather どうしたのーさっきから調子悪そうよ。 Ryoma: a: Huh? Did you say s [アクア]私の話も上の空という感じだし 体の調子でも悪いのかしら? | Aqua: tt seems your head's been in the | Azura: Goodness! rm so sorry. I've been clouds while I'm talking.. are you perhaps dumping all this on you. Clearly, you're not Ryoma: Oh, nah, it's nothing like that Azura: I know you wanted me to ask for help, but I think I've gone a little overboard [リョウマ]い、いや、そんなことはない。 ごめんなさい。 sorry [リョウマは、なぜ謝るんだ? Ryoma: W-why should you apologize? 私、 Aqua. I knew it. Ive been taking advantage of your good nature, haven't I? やっぱり調子に乗っていたかしら? この前あなたから、兄として頼っていいと 言われたから、そうさせてもらったんだけど Aqua: Since we had that talk about | depending on you like a big brother, I've been doing as you say, but. 少し あなたに頼りすぎていたー? Aqua: If so, don't worry, I'l reign it in だとしたらもう控えるから… 本当にこめ Ryoma: No! Don't apologize. It's my fault. [リョウマ]ち、違うんだ! それは 本当に違うんだ! Ryoma: N-no! That's... you're completely ! just didn't expect it to be like this [797]で、でも…今日のあなたは 私に頼られても、あまり嬉しそうじゃなかったわ。| all that happy to hear my requests. B-but... today you.. you didn't seem [リョウマ!それは勘違いだー! だがそう思わせたのは、 俺の半端な覚悟のせいだ…すまない。 Ryoma: You're misunderstanding me ! It Ryoma: l told myself I would be content just must have been my pathetic resolve that to make your life easier, but I'm not. made you think that way.sorry. [797]半端 ? you. Ryoma: The thing is I don't want to run errands and lift heavy objects for you. ああ、お前の事を妹だと思い、 俺は兄として支えるつもりだった Yeah, I thought of you like a kid sister and I I want to be there for you emotionally too. was all ready to support you like a big I want to be there for you as a man. だが-それは俺の言い訳に過ぎなかったんだ ! But . .. that was nothing more than one of Arura: Oh, my. What are you saying? [リョウマ1俺は…お前を妹ではなく 最愛の妻として娶りたいと思っていた Ryoma: I don't want you as a kid sister I want you betrothed as a wife I love abowe all else. [リョウマ]最近そう思ったわけじゃない… お前が白夜に来た時から.. Azura, I've known you for so long, I was always afraid to tell you how I felt since you came to Hoshido.. 俺はずっとそう思っていたんだ Ryoma: I've felt this wary for so very long. Ryoma: You never let anyone get clase to you. I wanted to be the exception. だが白夜王国の次代を担う第一王子の このリョウマは Ryoma: But I'm Ryouma... the eldest prince who will one day carry on the legacy お前を大事な妹だからとこじつけて 本当の気持ちを偽り続けていたんだ… Ryoma: I used the excuse of looking at you like my precious little sister to hide my real 情けない話だろう ? Aqua: That explains why you had this loolk Azura: I've always felt shy around you. I was [アクア1それで-今日はどこか 心ここにあらずといった顔をしていたのね… r face like you were in another afraid my heart would break if Igot too close Ryoma: I suppose we've both been trying to make the best of a bad situation. [アクア]もちろん妹として大事にしてくれる事も 嬉しかったけど 今の言葉はもっと嬉しい。 ! Aqua: tt goes without saying that I was | Azura: It doesn't have to be that way | content to be treated like your precious little! anymore. ister, but. your words today make me 私も 心のどこかでそれを望んでいたから、 妹として扱われることを拒否していたのかも… I Aqua: somewhere in my heart, I wished the same, and maybe that's why I wanted sister そうか Ryoma: Are you saying that you want things Azura: Yes, Ryoma! I don't want you to apen jars for me and carry my groceries. もちろんだ! [リョウマ]ぁぁぁっ! これからは妹ではなく Ryoma: Oh, oh yeah! That's right! No longer Azura: I lave you. I've been too scared to tell you that I wasn't sure you felt the same. 俺の大事な妻として…俺の家族になってほしい-Ryoma: But as my precious wife I want Ryoma: Azura. I've always loved you. From アグア? you to be family. That's cool, right Aqua?now on, 'll be there for you as a man should. 777は、ありがとう これで私はあなたの本当の家族になれるのね· Aqua: Yes, thank you... now I can be a true member of your family. Ryoma: will you promise me that you'll try to open up your heart a little more? 嬉しい Azura: Yesl I was afraid of losing you, but we were meant to be together Ryoma: Yeah, and next time, let's go out and buy you ring for you. It's supposed to be an 今度お前のために指輪を買いに行こう。 この大切な約束の証にな! t part of the p know! [アク刀ええ 私..とても幸せよ. End of S-Support Conversation](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/091/200/7b5.png "Azura x Ryoma - S support")
![Fire Emblem Fates: Aqua x Rvoma A-Support Conversation The first few lines had a reference to通せんぼor toasenbo, which is like King of the Hill (the game) or a barrier you put in your house to stop animals or children from reaching re This conversation suffers of the same problems like the C and B conversations. References to them being family are removed, replaced either with nothing or their own made up narrative. A lot of sentiment is lost in t localization. Instead of ending this conversation amicably like in the original, they just make them stand in front of each other in defiance. #Torrenta!Downpour riginal Translation With altered content NOA Version in blue [アクア]そこにいるのは·リョウマ?どうしたの? | Aqua: Ryouma is that you? What's wrong? | Azura: Goodness, Ryoma! You're blocking the whole hallway! May I get by? [アクア]うふふ。まるで私の行く先を 通せんぼしてるみたいよ。 Aqua: Ahaha. It's almost like you're playing gate keeper and refusing to let me through! そこを、どいてくれないかしら? 50 ass [リョウマ]いや、どかない。 今日こそは話を最後まで聞いてもらう。 Ryoma: Nope, I'm not letting you go. You'reRyoma: No! I'm not moving-at least, not going to listen to my side of the story. All until you hear me out. Azura: What do you mean? [リョウマ]俺が家族として、 そに兄妹とに距離を縮めようと声をかけると、 Ryoma: Every time I try to talk to you, to try bridge the gap between us as family, as Ryoma: I've been trying to talk to you all week, and every time I approach you, you run a お前はいつも逃げるように去っていってしまうー ! You always leave like you're trying to run | I'm sorry to corner you like this, but please, Azura, you have to listen! away from me だから今日は話を聞いてもらうまでは、 ここを通すわけにはいかない。 I can't let you pass until you hear what I have to say to you today. [アクア]だからその愛情は私じゃなく カムイに向けてと Aqua: I thought I told you to direct your attention to Kamui, not me Azura: I told you not to waste your time on me. You've found Corrin. [リョウマ]いや、違うんだ! No, e got it all vw always been your own person Ryoma: You may be here because Corrin was kidnapped, but you're not a replacement. [リョウマお前は勘違いしている。 Ryoma: You've been misunderstanding me. Ryoma:If you'll give me a chance, I'd like to be close with Corrin and you. 俺はお前のことを、カムイの 代わりだと思って扱ってきたわけじゃない。 I never meant to treat you as a substitute sibling お前が.777がアクアだから、 兄妹になりたいと思ったんだ。 You... it's because of who you are that I wanted to be closer as brother and sister (79T1リ39 Aqua [リョウマ]確かにお前と血の繋がりなどないし、I Ryoma: Yeah, okay, you and I aren't related お前が白夜に来たのだって… by blood and yeah, okay, the very reason you came to Hoshido 皮肉だが、カムイが 連れ去られたからだという理由に他ならない was cally for no ! than because Kamui was abducted だが俺はお前のことをヒノカやサクラと同様、 本当の妹だと思ってきたんだぞ? I Ryoma: but I've always thought of you the same as Hinoka and Sakura, as a.. [アクア]それは カムイの代わりではないと? | Aqua: And not just as Kamui's [リョウマ]ああ、何度も言わせるな。 Ryoma: Of course. Don't make me repeat Ryoma: Please, Azura. Don't make me say it アクアがアクアだからこそ、 俺はお前と大事な妹として守りたいんだ re ! else, that I feel like you're my precious little sister and I want to see you safe and happy. Aqua: Ryouma... thank you. And I'm sorry for the way I've been treating you そしてこれまでごめんなさい… 私の勝手な勘違いで、あなたに対して とても失礼な想いを抱いていたのね… I've been operating under a selfish delusion and I've thought of you in quite a boorish [リョウマ]いや いいさ。俺はお前の兄だ。 |Ryoma: Nah we're good. I'm your brother, 妹のちょっとした勘違いぐらいで、 腹を立てたりはしないさ。 small ing with my little sister, [アクカリョウマ…ありがとう ほんとに··· Aqua: Ryouma thanks I mean it 私…その言葉が聞けて 良かった" Aqua:l .. it's a relief to be able to hear you Azura:Oh. I'm so relieved! I'm afraid I've grown pretty attached to all of you. [リョウマ]感謝もしなくていい。 俺は兄として当たり前のことをしただけだ All I've done is what any brother should do. Ryoma: Except, from now own, I wish you'd that's the responsibility of a little sister? Aqua ただこれからはもっと俺を頼ってくれ。 それがむしろ妹として果たすべき責任なんだぞ? rely on me more. In fact, don't you think Ryoma: Good. I hope you'll lean on us a | little more well, especially me [アクア]ええ わかったわ。 get it でも 兄に頼るのが妹の責任なんて、 なんだかおかしいわねー Aqua responsibility to depend on her big brother, you'll ask for help when you need it. I think you're a little touched in the head me [リョウマははは、おかしくなどないさ。 Ryoma: Ahahaha, it's not so crazy [アクア]ならこれまでの分も… 沢山甘えさせてもらうわね。 Aqua: Well if you say so... then I'm going to Azura: I'm guessing you're going to stand take your word for it and cash in those checks you've promised. there blocking the hallway until I say yes. リョウマ兄さん。 Aqua Ryoma: That wasn't my original plan, but [リョウマ]ああ、任せておけ。 Exce End of A-Support Conversation](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/091/199/4c4.png "Azura x Ryoma - A support")
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Fire Emblem Fates Localization Controversy - Camilla x Keaton S excerpt
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![ire Emblem Fates - Azura x Leo Support The conversation in the Treehouse version has been changed into a hypothetically speaking" conversation, while in the original, Leon spoke about his own issues, that being his fear of being rejected in a love confession. Aqua in the original believed that he was speaking about another girl, she indirectly confesses at that point but tries to attenuate because she herself fears of not being the target of his feelings by claiming it's a non-romantic love, "I will love you as Mother has loved me". Leon sees through her and proposes The Treehouse version loses the subtlety and nuance #Torrentia!Downpour S-rank Support Conversatiorn Original NOA Localisation Leon: Aqua, will you listen to my troubles? Leo: Azura, I need some advice Aqua: Leon... If you're alright with me, then of course I will listen. Azura: Oh? Leon: The truth is... I'm afraid Leo: Say a man has grown to love a woman, but he's afraid to tell her how he feels. How should he go about proposing? I mean, hypothetically speaking... Aqua: Afraid? What are you afraid of? Azura: Mmm. That is a difficult situation. The deeper his feelings, the greater the risk... If she turns him down, his heart will surely be broken Leon: I'm afraid of being rejected... to the person I will confess to. Leo: Yes. It will Aqua: Leon... also understand that feeling. The want to be accepted is strong... because the pain of being rejected is too hard. he'll be elated Azura: But, then again, if he's really fallen for her and she says yes Leon: I guess that's right.. Leo: Precisely Aqua: However, when you fear being hurt, then you won't be able Azura:I know this is all hypothetical, but I think it's worth the risk to connect with anyone. It'll be okay, Leon. I'm sure you won't be You should go ahead and ask her, Leo rejected Leon: Aqua... Leo: What?! wasn't talking about me! Aqua: If, by chance... you get rejected... I won't reject you... I will Azura: Of course not. I'm just saying, in theory, if it WAS you, she'd love you as Mother has loved me say yes Leon: ..I'm sorry. I might have been a bit unfair Leo: Do you really think so? Aqua: What do you mean? Azura: I'm certain Leon: I love you Leo: Now you've taken all the fun out of it! Aqua: What!? Azura: What?! Leon: I wanted to convey my feelings for you Leo: Does it even count if the girl gives him a response before he asks? Aqua: Leon Azura: Heehee, I was just trying to help. You looked so stressed Leon: Yet earlier... I let you say that you won't reject me. With that, Leo: Do I still have to get down on one knee? my confession has no meaning. Because I feared of rejection... I made a mistake in the process... Aqua: Fufu. That's right. That was a bit sly. In any case, I still won't Azura: Of course you do! I want to hear you ask me properly reject you Leon: Aqua. Leo: As you wish, my love. Azura...will you marry me? Aqua: Sneakily or however else, I want you to say it again... As forAzura: Weren't you paying attention? The girl said yes me, I want to tell you... my feelings, too Leon: I love you, Aqua. I want you to marry me Leo: You are so frustrating. I can't wait to spend my life with you Aqua: ...Yes. Please take care of me [BLANK] End of Support Conversation S](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/088/492/652.png "Aqua x Leon support conversation S")
![Fire Emblem Fates: Aqua x Ryoma C-Support Conversation ummar There are several removed and altered lines that had to do with their relationship as a family Ryoma is no longer his authoritative self and has tendencies to become aggressive at random parts Azura refuses his help in an almost angry manner, which does not happen in the original, where she simply expresses gratitude. The localization makes her seem rebellious instead of wanting to be helpful and independent. The original also shows a slight tension between the two because the characters are similar in how they see their roles, that of protectors/leaders, which is absent in the localization. One other change is how Ryoma was changed to instead try to force a social interaction instead of trying to help Azura out of selflessness #Torrentia!Downpour With altered content highlighted in blue NOA Version Translation we Azura: Goodness! These boxes are heavier than ふう。少し休憩しましょ Aqua Phe, should take a little break it's no wonder I'm tired, didn't think there'd ht この量は、さすがに疲れたわ。 [リョウマ]·.777 ?一人で何をしているんだ? | [アクア]リョウマ。い、いえ。別に私は何も [リョウマ]何も、じゃないだろう。 Ryoma Azura? What are you doing carrying all of those weapons by yourself? Aqua ? what are you doing here al alone? Aqua Ryouma. I- I'm not doing anything all that special Azura: It's not a problem Ryoma: Moving around weapons pack by pack? You can't call Blan 武具を幾つも運んでいるじゃないか。 そんな重労働、女一人の力では無理だ。 This kind of heavy work's impossible for one girl. But don't worry about it. Leave it to me Ryoma Blank いいから少し俺によこすんだ。 Blank アクア] Aqua [リョウマ]むつ·意外に重いな。だが Ryoma: Ack! This is surprisingly heavy. But this Ryoma: Here. Let me help with that of these are heavy! Some thing 何てことはない よし、これで半分以上、俺が運んでやる。 Ryoma: I've got it. I'1l get the greater half Aqua, you do those lighter ones Ryoma: Why don't you carry that lighter box over there? アクアはそっちの軽いものを頼む。 [アクア]あ、ありがとう… [リョウマ]それにしても…こんな量、 Aqua T-thanks Azura: Thanks, Ryoma Blank Ryoma: Which makes me wonder... what made you think to transport all this by yourself? なぜ一人で運ぼうと思ったんだ。 for help once なぜ俺達仲間に いや Why not ask us ter ie 俺たち家族に頼ろうとしなかったんだ? Aqua: I simply thought I could move it all by myself [アクア]一人で運べる量だと思ったのよ。 Azura: Blank それに 途中で誰かに助けを求めるのも、 なんとなく言い辛くて。 AquAnd well .. once I've started somethin on my on I tend to be reticent to ask others Azura: I'm sorry. I thi auay You know I hate bothering people or [リョウマ]まったく お前は昔からそうだな。 | Ryoma: For real?.. I suppose you've always been like that. Blan だが、これからそういうことがあれば、 遠慮せず俺を呼べ Ryoma: But from now on, if you find yourself in that kind of situation, I want you to call me Hithout even thinking twice about it Ryoma: It's not a bother! I'd be glad to help you. I'm here for you anytime. Really お前は俺の妹だからな 兄として、必ず助けてやるさ。 Ryoma: Come on, you're my little sister. We're familyl You brother's always going to help you out. an [アクア]リョウマ ありがとう。 Azura: Thanks Ryoma でも、気にしなくて大丈夫よ。 次からは、上手くやってみせるから。 But you don't need to wor Azura: Now about me? Excuse me se Next time, you 'll see that I've got it all done without help Ryoma: Ah! There she goes あいつが俺に遠慮するのは 昔から変わらないな。 Ryoma Azura, wait! だが…そうだな。これを機会にもう少し 親交を深めていけるよう、考えてみるか Ryoma: Always that same hesitation around me, she hasn't changed at all Ryoma: Hmm. I really thought she'd warm up to me one day. I've got to try sonething else End of C-Support Conversation](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/090/460/b9a.png "Azura x Ryoma - C support")
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