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Lyra's Fanfic by Pony-Berserker FINALLY! MY FIRST MY LITTLE HUMAW FANFIC IS FINISHED! QUEBEC WEEKLY WILL SURELY PUBLISH IT! 3 HERE I HOPE SHE DELIVERS IT TO THE RIGHT PONY THIS TIME TWO WEEKS LATER OH, MY GOSH! THEY ANSWERED! THEY ANSWERED! LLEGAL PONY-BERSERKER Dear LyraHeartstrings02 Unfortunately, your fanfic was rejected, and will not be published in Quebec Weekly. First of all, I strongly encourage you to use a dictionary next time you write anything. I'm pretty sure there is no "w" in "gallop" And that is only one m appeared in your work. But orthography isn't the only issue. Your characters are extremely 000, and you turned most of them into exemplary Alicorn Sparkles (it's a term for a rlawless character syndrome). But the biggest problem is the main ides behind your story, namely shipping Fyre-Flye Fawst and Sibey is overdone in the fandom - it's like beatinga dead.. human. There was no single thing that seemed fresh and interesting. Next time, try writing something more original REJECTED!? istake of dozens that Best regards, Pre-reader who likes socks I KNEW I SHOULD'VE SHIPPED FYRE-FLYE WITH W. B.A CRABSON pony-berserker.deviantart.com

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